a long way away

You told me after 5 days you loved me,1

Asked me what I was willing to give up,2

And I gave everything to you,3

But somewhere deep inside I always knew,4

Things like this can never last,5

This is the most impersonal way of telling you,6

We have created a child,7

Inside me it grows,8

I hope you'll understand,9

At this time in my life,10

I can't handle this child,11

Time and time again I tried to convince myself this is right,12

But I know it will only leave me with regret,13

The mistake of thinking it could work,14

But baby,15

I still love you.16

Author notes

In this poem I have put a few of my fears that may come out of a newly started relationship, its a long-distance relationship but the way I feel for this guy is unexplainable, I guess I'm just alittle confused on what to do lol.

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  • HisOneTrueLove6107
    August 18, 2005
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    Lol. Im sorry you feel confused. This poem is really awsome. I'm not sure what it feels like to be in a long distance relationship, but hopefully you can get over someof your bumps and bruises. If its a newly started relationship, I'm going to tell you the same thing one of my friends told my when I started going out with my boyfriend. "There is going to be bumps and bruises, but all you have to do is stick together and get through it." I believe that my twins are just another opsitcle I have to deal with. A wonderful opsticle, it's just, our relationship will change after this. Great poem and good luck. Thank you for entering.
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