Tigerstar's Secret

A beutiful tortoiseshell she-cat padded wearily through a dark forest, starlight sparkled in her fur, she looked up at the sky, she was far from the familar paths of Silverpelt that she called home. She shivered, but she would not turn back now, it had taken many moons of effort to bring herself here. She padded into a small clearing, lit by the eeire glow of the fungus that provided all the light in this strange dark forest. A dark tabby was sitting on a rock, he looked over at her and called "You're a long way from Starclan Spottedleaf, what brings you here?" Spottedleaf padded into the clearing, and jumped up onto the rock. "I have important news to share with you, Tigerstar". "Go on then, what is this news?" Tigerstar growled. "I see your imprisioment in this..." Spottedleaf paused, there was no word to describe this dark forest "...Place, hasn't improved your attitude. I'll wait untill we're all here." Tigerstar looked puzzled, but before he could ask what she meant, three more cats emerged from the forest. One was a Dark Tabby tom like tigerstar, one was a tortioseshell she-cat, and the other was a dappled golden she-cat."my kits," Tigerstar commented.1

Brambleclaw paused at the edge of the clearing, he had not been in this forest since he had killed Hawkfrost, he'd guessed that Tigerstar had given up his plans to get revenge. He looked up at the rock and noticed a second cat standing on the rock, she was unmistakably a Starclan warrior.2

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  • sammylou94
    July 28
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    Really amazingly described, well done, i hope theres more

  • Hm, i doubt this is finished, please, please, please continue! It sounds like a very interesting turnout. Why would Spottedleaf be in the dark Forest? Excellent.
    ~T.


    • Fuzzyheart gold member
      July 5
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      Its not finished, I may eventaualy get round to finishing this, but ATM i'm focusing on 'The power of the moon'


  • Firestar-
    June 28
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    Nice, story, I like it great job.