To my two lovelies, you and you1
I send this poem of love2
You're not here yet,3
but soon will be, 4
and we can hardly wait.5
A special bond 6
you two will have7
as twins most certainly do.8
Parents wonder what's ahead9
in all the years to come.10
We're anxious and excited11
to have you both arrive.12
And when you do13
I know we'll all 14
do very well and thrive.15
One day you'll read 16
this little poem 17
of love and anxiousness.18
And then you'll know19
just how we felt back then20
about the both of you..21
Author notes
Twins are anticipated with apprehension and wonder. Just a little something for them to read some day.
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beautiful
i found this very toching and i have twin daughters who are now 17. it was a joy to bring them up. Too very plaset children. This is a wee gem of a poem that i'm sure your gifted grandchildren will love when they can read it. ood luck Dolores x -
Very sweet, only thing for me is the flow seems broken by the anticipation of rhyme when read. Some things rhyme while others don't, and it just seems to be statements at whim. Its very sweet and something to cherish, and I agree I wouldn't change it because of that nature, I was just giving my two cents on the actual content. Keep penning, I'll read more
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awwww! how cute. this is a very sweet piece and i think when the twins read it, they will be very touched! is this the way it feels to have children? i'm kinda unexperienced about that (i'm sixteen, so maybe that's a good thing). gee, i hope i have kids someday! great write and keep up the great work!
~sammy -
Awwwww I think ive said this on every comment ive posted in on this contest so far but I have to say it again I can't wait to have the experience I how ever have time still to wait. But I really look forward to it. I really love this poem. I wish you luck in the contest and with the twins.
God bless
Mary -
A jewel
Not my favorite of yours, but it is like a little Keepsake Box, a time capsule for the kids. I almost always advise a rewrite, but in this case, you should wrap it up like a present to save, savor and send on. -
Wonderful I loved it. And that for me is entirely true, I might have twins, but I'm scared yet anxious to hold them. I wonder what they will be like, and the simple apprehension of just having a baby. Great job and good luck.
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