The tears can't help but come when i see your pail body in that casket that will forever hold you. My best friend I loved, but is now gone. Your lips so blue and ice as my two fingers touch them. Kinda as a final goodbye. Your black hair is laying there on the plush white pillow as a blanket that will remind me of our time together, because you always loved me to mess with your hair. 1
I hope he fries for this. you were always a happy person;to me at least. When he raped you. Your world, our friendship, your relationship with your boyfriend- everything fell apart. Slowly but surely, but you tried to stay as strong as possible for the rest of the world. At 15. Ashlie Jamie Lorell was dead from suicide2
As i sit down i see everyone else you left behind to live in your memory and morn for you. Your boyfriend Jake, me(Melissa), Cassie, Malinda, Mike, and Zachary. They were all sitting down already i went and settled into Mike's arms. I don't think you knew what you were leaving, what we would have to face with you gone. I don't think you will ever know. None of us ready to talk, only ready to cry and reminisce in the great memory of you........ 3
We were all in English one day when the door opened, a beautiful, hansom, gorgeous man walks in. late 20's or early 30's. 6 foot blondish/browninsh hair blue eyes. A toned and ripped body. You could tell even under his dress shirt and slacks. He just eye popping. He set his things down on the teachers desk and wrote that his name was 'Mr. Young'. We all guessed he was the replacement for Ms.Lewis. the old lady that we drove crazy. 4
I looked over to Ashlie to see was her reaction the same as mine, and it WAS, but more intense.5
"No you are NOT" stopping her from her daze 6
"Not what?" 7
"I know what you are thinking and NO. it's wrong girl. You have someone called JAKE" 8
"No it's not. I Mean look at him. He's a god! and there's nothing going on. GOD Mell I'm not doing anything YET" she said with a devilish grin on her face. 9
I knew i couldn't change her mind about anything. "You know what- do what you need to do but don't get too deep into this. I don't want you to get into any trouble OK" 10
"OK MOM. but you cant blame a girl for wanting" and we laughed. That was the beginning to her end. I didn't think much of it back then but I did now.11
Knocked back into my reality by the Priest beginning, I saw her parents crying in the front. I had a erg to go to them but i didn't. I was afraid. So i dug deeper into Mike's arms and cried12
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ok i desided to start a new story because of resent events un my life. most of this is mainly real but there is fictional parts and characters and age but by the end of this you will understand. i know this is toucht but believe me this means so mcuh to me so please tell me what you think
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oooh, this is a good way to start a story!! MUST...READ...ON!!!...but not now....I gotta go...byezz
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This is quite nice. I like that you're able to get all your feelings out through your story. I hope things turn out well for you. Keep writing
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GREAT
OMG NERNY THIS IS GREAT NEVER DON'T STOP
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i know. i will go on. and i love that u commented. i just do this top vent and im glad you can see the seen. but umm later i gotta right some more
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heyhey gurl, This is such a sad story... but i was so into it, it made me wanna cry cus i could picture the whole thing in my mind... The parrents sitting there crying, the open casket... there was a lot of emotions.. but not to much emotion... I think this is a really good story and i am hopeing to see the rest (or some more of it) soon... this is intence, and if it is helping you get your feelings out, gurl, keep on writeing, its worth it... plus this story is the bomb lol... but keep it up and I really hope to see the next chaptor soon, and that everything will be okay... luv ya
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i think this is great. you knida leave us geussing about what is going on. this is sad and touchy but i want to see where this goes because it seems interesting.this reminds me of a book called emiko blue. and its so sad u should read it,= and this is sad too you need to hang in there
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