There used to be a time

There used to be a time.
Echoed words, and screams that shined.1

When the words would roll of my fingertips.
When the blood would drip from my soaked lips.2

While intentions where hidden within the page.
While the killers took my center stage.3

With no limitations, expectations, all a game.
With syringes plunged to relieve my pain.4

No words were spoken in my silent room.
In a world were death was an epic tune.5

God in a universe of a disturbed mind.
There used to be a time.

Author notes

Poetry 101 for the mentally frustrated & disturbed.
I will get there. Oh if it takes me an arm & and leg.
I will get there.

Blair.
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  • DarkOneShadow
    June 28

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    Interesting

    I have to say that your work is getting better and better each time that I see it.

    Good job!

    DarkOneShadow


  • Siby Anan
    June 27
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    The first lines of every stanza are really capturing, but the seconds lines are macabre and scary. Very artisic - great work.

    "When the words would roll of my fingertips"
    off*

    "While intentions where hidden within the page."
    were*

    "In a world were death was an epic tune."
    where*


  • C-r-a-z-y
    June 27
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    ^_^

    nice!!