We are inseperable; two halves of the same soul.1
Without you, I am not completely whole.2
You are my gateway to adventure and my true love's first kiss.3
You are my tragic history and my reason for bliss. 4
You are the stranger rapping on my chamber door.5
You are the only one I could ever adore.6
You are my constant companion; my prince and my champion.7
You are my escape, my addiction, my hopes, my affliction.8
You are more than just some ink and loose-leaf paper.9
You are my life; the very pattern in which I choose to live by. 10
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The wording delves deep into our emotions and the things we love. In this case, writing. You say a powerful amount in few words and that is admirable.
You are the stranger rapping on my chamber door.
Nice tip of the hat to Poe, and you used it in a way that worked with your poem. You have a talent for putting emotion into language.
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wow there was just somrthing about this that i really liked. the deep emotion and...idk. i just really like it!
(i need to look up some of these words tho)
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That's awesome. I'm glad you caught the deep emotion.
And I understand the looking up words part. I do it quite frequently when I read a friend of mine's work.
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Great use of emotion...i loved some of the wording you used, it struck a unique tone throughout this piece Great work!
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