I Will Be Free

I walk along the deep green grass1

Feeling the coolness between my toes2

I am going somewhere3

To where no one else knows4

I am off to conquer5

My demons and fears6

I will run to my hiding place7

Where no one can see my tears8

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Imitation For A Poem10

Mary Had A Little Lamb11

Who's Fleece Was White As Snow12

And Everywhere Mary Went13

The Lamb Was Sure To Go14

My Poem15

I Had A Tiny Tabby16

It Never Stayed In One Place17

When Time Came To Run18

She Was Beside Me For The Race19

Author notes

The second poem is an imitation for Mary had a little lamb.
The first poem is an imagery of running.

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  • Crys Moro
    June 26

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    Very imaginative, good choice of words! I like your comparrison "imitation" of Mary had a little Lamb, It is very cute, and well written!


  • Carina.J.LR
    June 26
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    hmm. kinda confusing, but I like it


  • Clary--Selene--Tayy gold member
    June 26
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    haha i like your poem