Sasuke Uchiha and Sakura haruno 4 ever!

Under the full moon, sakura was sitting on a waterfound and crying. She made a wish and hope that Sasuke like her and go out with her.1

Sasuke was walking and saw Sakura crying by the water found. Sasuke kneel down and hug Sakura Haruno. He said Whats the matter? Sakura looked at Sasuke and said: have you ever been in love before with some precious to u and never tell anybody? Sasuke said: yea and im afraid to tell her shes so annoying! Sakura said: Who? Sasuke looked in Sakura eyes its you Sakura Haruno. Sakura was shocked she said: ME? Sasuke said: yeppers. Sakura wish finally come true. Sasuke said: Come on lets take a walk i got to show you something. Sasuke took sakura in a forest and saw their names on a tree with there nmaes. Sakura says: Wow Sasuke thats so sweet. Sakura finally kiss Sasuke on the lips and cryed under the full moon.

Do you like Sasuke and Sakura together?

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  • Haratik
    August 6
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    XD YAYZ!!!!

    YAYZ SASUSAKU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • Samurai Jin
    July 1
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    rhis is good but try to put naruto in the catagories and Sasusaku...GO sasuSaku!!!

    characters: 2.


  • goffyprincess
    June 28
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    i like ur story is kind of gud


  • Miss Recondite
    June 26
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    I'm sorry to say, but you could have done better with the dialog. And use paragraphs!!! And insted of using, 'Sasuke said:'
    It should be, "....." Sasuke said. Use paragraphs, because sometimes, I couldn't tell which one was talking.
    Besides that, it was great, keep up the good work!