Ummm

A contest entry

• Five Words by Duality.. 175 points, ended June 26, 2009, 17 entries
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  Unidentified...
  July 2, 2009
  
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  this is true in a way. I wouldn't say that we live for death, i'd just say that we live to do all we can before we die..before what happens next.
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    XxXEmosCryTearsXxX
    July 3, 2009
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    Yeah but very second we are getting closer to when we die
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  Duality.
  June 26, 2009
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  Great. i hate stories that are like why do we live if we just die... But this was good!
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  Much-Dipstick
  June 26, 2009
  
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  I've looked at most of the contest entries for the Five Words contest and so far, this is my favourite because to me, this didn't sound cut off or squashed short, it sounded natural and finished, as well as being completely thought-provoking and very powerful. It was almost chilling, especially in it's simplicity, and it's one of those things that you'd love to see expanded, but know would lose a bit of the magic if you made them longer. Great job and good luck!!!!!!!