The Sweetest Rose

You looked at me as if you were going to ask a question. *What is...oh, never mind I remember* and I looked at you, and you wrote on your paper. Then later again you looked at me confused and asked *How do you spell...oh, never mind, I remember.* Then again I'm sitting there checking to make sure my spelling words are correct...and you whisper in my ear *Does this look right?* and I look at his word and he's pointing to *acknowledgement* and he says "wait...yeah it is." and then my teacher takes every ones papers. He looks at me again, and says *Every time I forget something, I look at you, and I remember. There's something about you, that makes me not forget anymore.*1

Ahhhh, give me the sweetest rose.2

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This isn't meant to be a full out story. It's just something sweet to brood on.

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  • xSarahx
    August 23, 2005
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    Awww.....



    That's so sweet. TELL ME MORE TELL ME MORE LIKE DOES HE HAVE A CAR!? lol...

    Catcha later Mel.

    Sarah

  • La Dama del Ayer
    August 15, 2005
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    I thought it was cute
    its well writen and I like the way u wrote it cause it just sounds like a real conversation. It sound real and well it flows nicely.
    keep it up
    ~*BB*~

  • HeWillAlwaysBeAFool
    August 14, 2005
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    Yes, it is sweet... Really great write. You should continue on this. except just make them little blips. not a full out story.
    Great job! really loved it!
    ~Sarah