Need help with name, Chapt. 2

He walked up to her, looking sly of course. The smile of her face revealed that she had no idea who he was. She moved her body so she would look flirtatious. He just stared at her and she had no idea what to do. She just got up ever so slowly and looked at him, almost pleading to him  to talk to her.1

"Heh Kayla, aren't we in a sexy mood today."he said acting casual.2

A look of confusion crossed her face almost immediately. She stopped smiling and tried to remember who this guy was. How did he know her name?3

"Oh, forget me already? Guess you don't wanna go out to lunch like we PLANNED!"he almost yelled.4

She stepped back, even more confused than ever. This can't be Mr. Shaggy, can it?5

"No. It's not you under that hot body of yours, is it?"she said slowly and biting her bottom lip.6

"Uhh...well I don't know, is it me? DUH! Get a grip! When you see a hot guy you've got to have, you act all weird."he said acting like he actually knew her.7

"How would you know? You don't KNOW me."she said accusing him.8

"Oh, don't I? I've seen you. You didn't even know who I was and just decided to go after me. Talk about shallow! You didn't take a second look at me before I look like this."he said yelling in her face.9

She put on a smug look and told him to get this lunch thing over with. So he showed her to his car and they jumped in. It took awhile to get off, since the parking lot was always constantly crowded. When they finally got out he headed towards a Sonic. 10

It was very quiet in the car for some time. So he turned on the radio. It wouldn't be long until they got there anyway. It was really close. But far enough it wouldn't be too busy. They pulled up to the Sonic and got out.11

"So what do you want?"he asked.12

"Well...how about a cheese burger, small fries, and a Cherry Limeade."she said like she went there often. She knew what she wanted. She thought about it before they got there. She always thought it rude to keep the person waiting while you decide what you want to have.13

"Alright. I guess I will have some chicken fingers, medium fries, and a Coke."he said choosing ever so slowly.14

He spoke into the speaker and ordered what they wanted. It said it'd be a couple of minutes to get it. Now Jason was stuck, what was he going to talk about now? A couple of minutes can seem like a couple of hours.15

Kayla yawned and said,"So, what do you like to do for fun?"16

"Fun? Oh...well...I like to draw and write stories. I also like to hang out with friends and go on the computer for like games, the Internet, stuff like that."he said trying to choose the things he liked the most.17

She nodded and smiled, as if saying that was cool. So she decided to comment too. So she wouldn't be rude. "Aaaw...well...let's see... I like to drive, that's fun. I also love to hang out with friends and go to the mall or go to the movies. I like the go on the Internet too. I really love to listen to music. Not really into sports. But I do like to run. Just for fun, nothing for school."she said nodding and talking at the same time.18

He smiled at her. Just looking her over. By that time the person who delivers the food to your car showed up and knocked on their window. Jason jumped, surprised by the person. He unrolled the window.19

"Hi, that woud be... $8.50."said the worker. He handed her the money and said his thank-you looking embarrassed as ever. He rolled up the window and handed Kayla her food. Kayla took the burger out of the wrapper half-way and started eating it. Then Jason followed her and did the same. Making sounds of delight by the food, she smiled. "Thanks, this is great. We'll have to do this sometime again. But of course, I'll bring my own money next time. He smiled and went back to eating.20

About fifteen minutes later they headed back to the school. This time, talking more to each other. She said he should look like this everyday. It made him look a whole lot better. He took a note of that and agreed it would be a nice change.21

When they got to the school parking lot, he took her to her class. People were surprised to see them together. But not too much, since he was looking nice and she was already known to be a little shallow. She wasn't even there long and they already seem to put it into a  personal profile. She thought to herself,"I should be more careful how I act." Kayla looked down at her feet feeling bad that she was this way. He looked at her smiling. He didn't care, all he wanted was for her to be his.22

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Hope you like this new chapter, sorry it took so long, and still need help with name. Any ideas will help. Also, please comment on it, I would like to know what you think.

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