man(un)kind ----poem

man kind ?
untrue,
as false as a
"simple woman"
or
"complex man".
kind,
perhaps,
where riches are promised.
generous maybe,
where greed
is concerned.
they leave out
half the truth
in description,
to cover man's monstrosity.1

i hear the whispers2

of dirt and hell and fat and3

evil.4

i know.5

man(un)kind; perhaps.6

they will destroy themselves7

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  • perfect paradox
    August 26
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    LOVELY! (:

    I love the part about the complex man. haha, very very nice.

    love,
    .PP.