I had a dream. A dream forever engraved deep in my memories. A dream of the day where life was full of cruelty. A dream when my only desire was for the world to end. But as light drew near, I dreamed of the girl who saved my life and whom I swore to love for all eternity.
A contest entry
- (MAX of 5 sentences) Hair of the Dog, baby. Sooner or later we all gotta Dance With The Devil. by Shadow-Kissed.
375 points, ended June 30, 23 entries
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Comments
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Wow. This was spectacular! The only thing I caught wrong with it was "A dream of the day were life was full of cruelty." I think you forgot to put an "h" in the word "were" so that it would be "where". Other than that, this was great. If you fix that up, you're definitely a finalist.
Thanks for entering and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
-Chantale
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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