Dreams Affect Reality

She had always been a dreamer. Not matter how hard she tried to stay focused in the real world, she'd always end up dreaming again. Maybe it was because she wouldn't let her emotions surface. Every time she saw him, she would swim with emotions, she felt confused to this reaction and as a result lock them up again. 1

All the feelings affected her in her life which, frustrated her! She knew they meant trouble. This had happened before to her and she wouldn't let it happen to her again...she swore, she couldn't! She just stood there as he went away from her, moved away from her...far far away.Her throat clogged up, all she managed to say was " Don't go...please." All her dreams of being with him were drained and left her weak. She hadn't gotten used to her usual routine for a whole week. She only remembered one time they had ever talked. He bumped into her accidentally and said "I'm so sorry, i didn't look at where I was going." "That's okay." she had stammered. That was it, that measly dialogue was all they had said to each other. 2

She had felt weak and lonely. No way, she had suffered once and she wasn't going to make the same mistake again! She would wait for him to come to her. As she laid down on her bed, preparing for sleep, she slipped into another dream, the place that comforted her, healed her and most of all made her Prince Charming appear.3

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  • Grasping for breath
    December 27, 2005
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    amazing!

    this story was amazing! you painted a beautiful picture in my head... this girl seems to not realize that she shouldn't make the same mistake again, huh? but really it depends which you think it is, mistake or fate? great write i loved it!

  • Amanda21
    August 14, 2005
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    hmm... this was really short and got me thinking... i feel bad for this girl... it seems as though she's tried with this type of thing before and it didn't go so well... makes me want to help her good write! good luck in the contest also!
    -amanda-