I once asked God

I once asked God to take away my troubles. Nothing changed. I guess it means I'm doing pretty okay.

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  • J-Dus
    September 30

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    That is a pretty insightful quotation, if I do say so myself, I need to extend this comment so I am going to utalize larger words than I rightfully should, pardon the spellings and grammar, but I really need comments XD


  • Heropsycho
    September 23

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    Dude, I really like this. Says something, in few words.


  • hobo kiti
    July 13
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    THUMBS UP


  • Bethany
    July 13

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    Haha, I would have said something else, but okay, way to go for creativity and not basking your religion =p


  • mad7maddy
    June 27
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    Good

    it was really good!


  • Be.Your.Own.Hero
    June 23
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    fantastic

    *nibbles your arm* ^^

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Taboo Pixie
    June 22
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    Splendid.

    Absolutely love it. Did you make it up?


  • Other Side
    June 22
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    It's short but I like it. Nice job

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