The Warlock's Revenge (part 10)

"Janine DuBois-Lavigne? Well, that makes an ironic sort of sense I guess," said Jonas as he heard this news coming from his older self. "But why the betrayal? Didn't she love him?"1

Older Jonas shook his head. "No, Janine never loved Cyrus. She, in fact, had spent years devising this plan to end his tyranny on her friends and fellow witches. You see, not only did Janine have the ability to possess any living being, but she also had an ability for cognition. Through her dreams, she was granted visions of the future, certain outcomes to fates other than her own. This is how she learned of Cyrus's deal with Lavitos and of his love for her. It was this love, this unreturned love, she used to her advantage to carry out her plan."2

Jonas sat back and considered what he had just heard. Janine had spent years working on this plan? Why not just do something about Cyrus the day after she had her dream?3

Author notes

This is way not finished yet....I'm going to come back and edit this and change it because i don't like it, but i don't have the time to do it now. anyway, it'll be up for a little bit until i can work out something better....but i promise to come up with something much better than this!!! again, srry for the disappointment...

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  • Ruby Petal
    August 26, 2005
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    Cool story. Still good. Mine seems to be failin so i m gunna delete it.

    Ure daughter
    xmazx


  • interruptedangel19
    August 21, 2005
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    Great

    It was interesting. I hope that you do come back to edit it I really love this story.

    Audrey Rose


  • Thayla
    August 14, 2005
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    mmmmmmm....... interesting.


  • Unique-Rebel85
    August 13, 2005
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    Yes please come back and finish it ... this is so good .. and its not a disappointment ... just leaves us thirsting for more .. lol ..