Amelia is my super cat. Amelia is an American short hair with light grey, dark grey, and white markings. She has beautiful yellow-green eyes. Amelia came from a shelter because i don't believe in going to a pet store. After I got her she was my little girl ever since. Amelia sleeps on my bed every night. She wakes me up every morning. Amelia follows me around my house until I go to school or stop to pick her up. Until I come home she waits by the window watching for my to walk up. She is really funny when someone comes to the door. When my dogs bark she starts growling my friend gave her the name miss growly pants.My Mom say that Amelia thinks she's a dog because she chases her tail and plays fetch. I just say she is a little confused. She has the spare room in my house all for her when I leave. So she has something to do when I'm gone for a long time. I was lucky to have waited so long to get a cat. If I had just gotten anyone cat I may not one as good as my amelia.
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Thank you for the nice story
about Amelia. She sounds like a very nice cat and i'm sure you love her very much. The story is just a bit short of the minimum, but is very nicely done.
Trish
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oh i love that cat. haven't seen her in awile though, how is she?
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aww
The cat sounds uber cute! actualy this i sreally good. No really i mean it. Keep it up.
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Try reading your work aloud ... some things just don't sound quite right.
Ex: If I had just gotten anyone cat I may not one as go as my amelia.
Sounds like a great cat though
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How cute. I would of liked this story if you made it a pinch longer, though. But, well done!
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