Dreams (9 words)

Running unchecked repeatedly into the wall, the writer died.

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  • Wow. I don't think a mere 9 words has ever taken my breath away... Your truly amazing. Very thought provoking, yes. It's sad. When I read is, I don't see it as a writer. Moreso, life itself. Obstacles... Killing the long inside.. Wow your wonderful.


  • MsAlee gold member
    July 12

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    LOL, oh wow do i know the frustration of wanting to run into the wall multiple times because i couldn't get something in my writing to click.


  • Kevan gold member
    June 22

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    Extremely thought provoking.

    It makes me think of you, unsure what to enter in this contest, so you kept running into a wall. Funny Anyways, thank you for entering, and best of luck in the contest.

    Kevan.