The beat flows from the drum,1
and the words jump from mouths.2
But the melody, from the pieno,3
as fingers fly,4
its what I love.5
Every song has a bum bum bum beat.6
Thou, why I love the song is the la de da of the the melody.7
The words are nice,8
but I love the melody.
A contest entry
- ~Choose Your Flavor~ Ice Cream Party by Friesian.
600 points, ended July 21, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
The option 2
Comments
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Aww! Beautiful! The simplicity of the poem is gorgeously written. I heard the sound of a piano when I read this! Excellent job!
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Great job! =) I loved it.
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