His last Smile

Relishing his last smile, he pushed the button, Hoping.

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Well, I tried to portray the last seconds of a suicide bomber. Hopefully I hit home. Thanks Kevan, for this concept of 9 words.

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  • tonialoise
    June 22

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    Hmmm... I envisioned a worker about to go home and submitting his report. You think my mind is still stuck on work? Interesting concept though. Nice job Kirin.


    • Kirin
      June 24
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      Report??!!! Now why would you remind me of that??! Toni, I think your fingers are craving for some coding...


  • lavanya
    June 21

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    *phew* bombastic nine words dear...impressed keep writing no matter nine or nine thousand words...good luck sweet one.


    • Kirin
      June 21
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      Hehe.. Thanks lav 9000!! Wow!! When will I ever write so much??!!