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You know how they say once you've hit your lowest place to go there's no where left to go but up? That's a lie, sure you can't go down but you can remain stationary, never going any where in life. That's where I am right now.........1

Tears welling up into her swollen eyes, she places the pen down. Glancing at the walls that seem to be closing in around her, suffocating her, she leaps from her bed, runs to the window,flings it open and screams.2

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this was going to be an entry into a contest by illegalfairy but  unfourtunately i have not finished it and the contest has been closed for judging. i hope to finish it. the first lines are not mine those of illegalfairy.from you know.....to right now....

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