A Goth's Love- Ch 3-"LOOK OUT!"

"....."1

"You're serious?"2

"Nope" the police officer said.3

"huh?" Lisa & Joey looked at each other4

"APRIL FOOLS!" the two police officers said, then laughed.5

"huh?" Lisa & Joey asked again looking clearly puzzled6

"It's... not April." Lisa said confused.7

"We know." the two police officers said, while taking off realistic looking masks.8

It turned out to  be two of their friends, Ash and Ben.9

Joey mumbled something that sounded alot like "idiots"10

"Soooo..." Ash said ignoring Joey "where were you two going?" only because she knew they were dating.11

"ummmmm..." Lisa said blushing "no-where?" she said hopefully12

"Right" Ash said skeptically, then looked around "and when are you gonna let us in?"13

"OH!" Lisa said then laughed "come in" then heaved a great big *sigh*14

Lisa saw that Ash and Ben were sending each other looks that clearly said "I Want You."15

Lisa pulled Ash away from the guys who were deep in discusion about their favorite band Fear Factory.16

"What's with those looks?" Lisa asked with a small smile17

"What looks?" Ash asked not able to hide a grin.18

"you know! the looks between you and Ben!" Lisa squealed.19

Ash grinned and said simply, "we're dating."20

"OMG!" Lisa screeched "OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!" she stopped and was breathing heavily.21

"OH MI GOD! i'm SOOO happy for you!" she said then added in an undertone "I know you've liked him  for like.... ever."22

just then the guys came over.23

"what was that all about?" Joey asked.24

"oh nothing." Lisa replied25

"If you don't tell me I will tickle the living hell out of you." Jeoy said looking serious.26

"ummmm I'll let Ash tell you...." she said then added "it IS her news."27

"ummmmmmm" Ash said looking at Lisa "I hate you"28

Lisa laughed29

"i'll tell him" Ben said30

"YOU KNOW TOO?!" Joey burst out, looking miffed.31

"yea." he said "that's because I GAVE her the news"32

"what?" Joey asked  perplexed "but i thought she said..." *sigh* "oww!" he groaned "my head hurts!" he said.33

"don't think too hard." Ash laughed.34

"Joey!" Ben said "look at me"35

"okay" he said when Joey turned "me and Ash" he pointed to himself then to Ash "are dating"36

He gaped at him "ARE YOU SERIOUS?!" he yelled, looking quite happy "you've liked her for like... 5? 6 years?"37

Blushing, Ben said "yea"38

"Yea!" Ash said brightly "and we're gonna go out tonight!" she then grabbed his hand. he laced their fingers together then kissed her hand.39

"AWWW! That's so cute!" someone behind them said.40

Ash and Ben spun around and saw Mike and Jess. Ash laughed and ran over to give Jess a big hug.41

"I can't believe it!" Jess said "you two are FINALLY dating"42

"lets go downstairs!" Joey suggested43

they went downstairs and Joey, being himself, put in a CD and turned to # 2.44

"this one is dedicated to Ash and Ben" he said in his best announcer voice.45

Cause I saddle up my horse and I ride into the city46

I make a lot of noise, cause the girls they are so pretty47

Riding up and down Broadway on my ol' stud Leroy 48

And the girls say 49

Save a horse, ride a cowboy50

Everybody says, save a horse, ride a cowboy51

Ash Gasped "JOEY!" she said shrilly then hit him52

every one laughed because of the looks on both Ash's and Joey's face. Ash was pouting and Joey looked like her hit had really hurt him and was rubbing the spot where she hit him.53

"Hey!" mike said laughing "you deserve it lil bro!"54

Just then Ben's cell phone started ringing.55

" 'ello?" he answered it.56

"Ben?" his boss Jenn was on the other line57

"Yes?"  he asked58

"Barb couldn't make it in this after noon. do you think you can take her shift?" she asked59

"no... i don't think i can. you see there's a fair in town and i'm gonna go with my girl and my friends." he winked at Ash60

"GRRRRR" Jenn growled61

"sorry" he said hanging up.62

"I'M DRIVING!" Mike yelled out63

Mike was pulling out of the drive way just as a HUGE diesel truch came over the hill 64

"OMG!" Ash screamed "MIKE! LOOK OUT!"65

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  • dorkfish2007
    January 6, 2006
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    AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!1

    lylas supa supa lotz...oh i like the >save a horse ride a cowboy song idk what it's called so yeah good enough lol who know's lol that's prolly what it is called ah well i don't listen to country often so yeah...well ttyl bye


    your friend-->becky<--


  • hells fallen angel
    September 7, 2005
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    grr i hate cliff hangers but i like this story

  • ICaughtFire
    August 12, 2005
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    AHHHHHH.
    SUSPENSEEEE. KILLING. -Dies?-
    Why do you always leave off at such a cliffhanger then take SO long to do the next chapter ehhh?
    well revisions are very minimal on this one. Only a few mistakes I saw actually.
    YAY. <3

    -x-