Pither pat, pither pat1
Rain falls from the sky2
Everything is wet and fresh.3
Inside, warm and dry, 4
but past the 4 walls,5
wet.6
The rain leaves,7
enter the newly cleaned land.8
Take a breath,9
fresh air fills the lungs that are a in the lucky mankind10
because they have felt11
after the rain.
A contest entry
- Challenging Challenges [Options] by Asfand.
225 points, ended July 2, 10 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
I hope I did a good job. It's not that easy not useing 'o''s.
Comments
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I think you did a nice job of showing the feeling of rain. It created the atmosphere very well. The beginning was lovely! Thank you for your entry!
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Good job! I liked it! =)
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