As Peter and I departed at the line between the girls’ dorm and the boys’ dorm, I noticed that he had a light scar on his face, I didn’t find it annoying or anything, I just didn’t notice it before.1
I stepped into my dorm room, to find my room mate asleep, of course, she was even perfect; she even looked perfect when she was asleep. Ugh. I rolled my eyes and plopped onto my bed. Great, even the beds are perfect! I looked at my class schedule,
1st period: English
2nd Period: Maths
3rd Period: Geography
4th Period: Lunch
Ugh, they all seem normal except one all the way at the bottom
7th Period: Vampire 101
What the hell is with that?!
Meh, whatever. Like I said, this school is stupid. I looked at my dorm sheet, my room mates name is Mandy Love. Oh look at that, Love. I bet she’s totally normal (sarcasm).
Hmm…school doesn’t start for another few days, gives me some time to look around the school. But for now, maybe I should get some sleep.
Ugh, what the hell! Why am I being shaken awake?
“Five more minutes.” I managed to mumble.
“No! Get up!” a girls voice screamed, oh yay, this must be Mandy.
“No, in fired, gof faway!” I mumbled into my pillow.
“What?!” She sounded insulted.
“Ugh!” I sat up, “I SAID NO IM TIRED GO AWAY!” Then I laid back down.
Mandy leaves in a huff.
“Yeah that’s what I thought buh-bye.” I said rolling my eyes.2
But 5 minutes later she came back with the head mistress, ugh great.
“Nope, she don’t scare me, I still ain’t getting up.” But as I turned around I realised it wasn’t the headmistress…it was my mother.
“Hi Cam.” My mother said.
“Hi mum, how’s it going?” I asked sleepily.
“Fine, how are you? Get up.” She said.
“That’s good. Ugh, fine.” I said standing up. I looked at my clock it was only 4:30am and I was being pulled out of bed. I only went to sleep half an hour ago!
“Why am I up this early?” I said plonking back onto my bed. Everyone sighed in annoyance. “Oh boo hoo you’ll live.”
Next thing I know, I’m being grabbed by the back of my t-shirt and pulled to my feet.
“Get dressed, NOW!” My mother screamed at me. I looked at the uniform, green blazer and checked green and red skirt, knee length.
“Ok ok ok. Sheesh.” I grabbed the uniform and walked off into the bathroom.
“I thought school didn’t start for a few more days?” I called from the bathroom.
“Yes, but you have been asleep, for those few days.” Mum replied, I went silent. Great.3
I throw my hair into a quick ponytail, grab my school stuff and head out of the door.
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Chapter 2, enjoy. Hope you like it.
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This was great, and I have read this one. yes i did.
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Hiya!
Interesting chapter with characters that I'm sure will play a part later on as the story progresses. I would suggest you slow this chapter down a little. It moves too fast. There are many ways to do so, and I will help you, if you like.
Still, I am rather interested in seeing what Vampire 101 is. As for her sleeping those 'few days,' I find it rather odd she and her mother are familiar with her sleeping for days. Hmm...
Lady E,
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Sort of a rush, but the story is getting better! Carrying on...
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thanks^^
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Um...she slept for days? Hmm, maybe she was hibernating.
Anyway, I think the story is okay but I noticed that you mixed the tenses though. Kinda confusing, really.
Quite a cliffy with this though. How did she sleep so long? How did Mandy get her mom? Vampire101 sounds interesting too...
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lol, hibernating
Sorry:$
She was tired
Her mum was at the school, she is a helper teach thereI forgot to mention it, sorry.
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awesome
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thank yu...
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I liked this chapter. You introduced more characters, which I'm guessing are going to play an important role in future chapters. I think you need to add a little more to the story, so that away it doesn't progress so fast. Other than that, I enjoyed reading your chapter and will read the next because I'm interested in seeing what this vampire 101 is. lol
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Thanks soo much for the comments
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Yea this was good, making you could make it a bit longer? Or make a 3rd chapter? If you did make another chapter I'd lyk ta read it :-)
Wow she sleeps for ages lol
Good story hahahaha
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Lol, im making a 3rd chapter, im almost done
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it isnt as good as the first one like BloodLikka said you need more meat in the story because yur story has gone from great to average. Keep it up and make this piece graet as the first one!
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I suck at this, i dont know if im gunn continue it...
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1. its BloodyKilla and 2. i try my hardest!!!
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haha i tried
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Wow getting intresting. Vampire 101 lol that made me laugh.Umm I think that maybe there needs to be a little more spacing for paragraghs, How about after,
Oh look at that, Love. I bet she’s totally normal (sarcasm).
?, Anyway I really love this story, Keep going. Please!!!
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haha thanks, yeah im trying to do the 3rd chapter, but im blocked
i cant do it.
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I think you should explain things a bit more, not take it that fast. like what is her mum doing at her boarding school?
wondering what the third chapter holds...
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thanks for the comment on the 1st chapter, there is more reads than the 2nd one
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nice..keep it up
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heheh late reply...
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