AS the years changed the seasons and the people too began to change, I continued to grow. I began to feel things- things I've never felt. I experienced things beyond my imagination. Things in my life began to happen. The changes in my life continued on throughout the years. While the changing continued; the more and more different I seemed.I felt more than I've ever felt, and I experienced more and done more things than I've ever had before. What is this? I wondered to my self. All at once the pain hit me. The pain was very intense; and I was angry and confused as it happened.While in the mist of all this- passed emotions, and the array of the many feelings that I haven't felt in years seemed to overpower me. Then all at once I couldn't see life as it is now, only what it was. I couldn't hear things in a normal tounge Then out of the mist of everything came a voice, calm and very soft. It said to me something I couldn't hear because of all the chaos and confusion. Then out of no where came a clap of thunder. In an instance everything became still and very quiet.Then I felt a rush of wind coming towards me fast, when it reached me it stopped. As it spoke to me I knew in an instant that it was the voice I couldn't hear. Then it repeated what it said before; PUSH" still standing and very confused I backed away slowly but was stopped in my tracks.When I turned around I saw a man standing there looking and pointing at me; PUSH! This time everything began to shake. In all of the shaking I began to push and push. When I finished I saw me. I was standing there looking at what I thought was me. As she walked away I followed close behind. In a flash I was standing in a world that was much deeper and more darker than the place where I've ever been before.There I saw a glow like a fiery ball. What is this? I asked. The girl turned to me and she began to fade. While I was running I saw a light. As I ran I began to see things a little better. I could hear more clearly than ever before. Finally reaching the light an image appeared before my eyes. The closer I got the clearer it was- The person I saw standing in that light was me! And standing by my side was the man I saw once before. I could hear Him speaking to me, telling me that the person you see standing here in the light is the person you have given birth to.Then he said pointing at me; "You called to me from the pits of hell and I answered you by coming to you and I gave you another chance, a new life". In saying this I faded and faded until I was no more.Then he turned to me and spoke once more; "You now have a life filled with Hope, Love, and the Reserection of a new born soul.
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Comments
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oh my the fact i said in a previous comment to you the pits of hell sent a shiver thru me .. some connection with you i do belive and from this rebirth you have been delivered to better life god bless you and glad i took time to read you im sure we will both enjoy each others work and days here on ap xo
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There are alot of great ideas here. You've got alot of emtion. Think about sectioning off paragraphs because it's easier on the eyes.
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thank you. an i will rember that next time. this i thougt to be a poem, thats how this looks on paper anyway thanks again
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