My Last Goodbye
I still remember
When I said goodbye
It was the last night
I saw you alive
I wanted to cry
but I didn't want to
Make my mom cry by watching me
Untill we got the call you passed away
My parents rushed over to say
goodbye and they love you
But it was to late
I remember at the funeral
I choke on tears
Trying to not show how I really felt
Now when I think back
It reminds me of you
And it kills me to say
I never forgot your small or laugh
So I know you are watching over me
But I will remember everything
For the rest of my life
Cause Grandma you ment alot to me
So Goodbye1
Never Me
Its never me to be found
But you look right at me
Its never me to be seen
But I am right in front of you
People think I am invisible
But only my friends can
See me
I feel like an Outcast
But only on accastion
But I tried out for soccer and Cheerleading
Hoping to be noticed
but so far only six people noticed me
and others think
I don't exist
So its never me to be found
But you look right at me
And it's never me to be seen
But I am right in front of you
what do you think of my poems?!?!?!?!?
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I loved them. They are so heart-felt. And I am guessing they are based on real experiences and feelings. Well done.
-Chantale
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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pretty much the first one is about my step-grandmother that I only knew for 5 years but it felt like 1 and the other one is true most of the time
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