I breathed in pained gasps, afraid. My core temperature spiked and I felt like I was being ripped apart from the inside, melting even. I screamed louder as I felt my bones break. I was begging, pleading for help but I knew none would come. I watched my nails being ripped apart forming claws as I bit my lip refusing to scream anymore. When I stopped fighting the change it became easier. My skin just flowed back revealing my inner more powerful self. I peered into the lake. I was a black furred, golden-eyed were-leopard.
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Were-leopard? Okay, now that's a new one!!! Great story, I had no idea where it was going which was awesome, it's good to be surprised.
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I think you described the whole transformation really well. The pain and the desperateness. I've nevr heard of were-leopard! Good idea!!
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very nice. The ending was very unexpected. I though she was being tortured and killed. But this is good too lol XD Excelent job with the description. Very vivid and exotic. Well, I guess exotic for me loll. VEry nice.
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Oooh, I like this! It sounds really painful. You had nice descriptions and detail! Loved the ending!
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Interesting... The end was very unexpected how she turned into a were-leopard. I like the vivid descriptions on her struggle, pain, transformation. Title suits it like a second skin.
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