Shh.

"What--"1

"Shut up!"2

"Stop, please--"3

"Shut the hell up!"

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have 0. (?) (Line numbers)
    Ratings:

Comments


  • MsAlee gold member
    July 12

    Edit | Reply
    Wow! This leads to so many story possibilities and has me completely wondering what exactly you were thinking and how far the abuse went before the person actually shut up.


    • clclark
      July 12
      Edit | Reply
      Thanks for the comment! I'm not sure where it was going either, but I like it. Might decide to do something with it, but I'm not sure.