Homeless

The cold gnaws at my skin like a wolf to its prey. The air is thick and chills my nostrils; my eyes stay shut and cannot see. My teeth remain clenched and cannot talk; my fingers lay swollen and cannot feel. I hear a crack that shakes the earth and light radiates though my eyelids. There will be rain, it will fall like glass and shatter on my reality.

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  • Queenie-Chan
    July 15
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    this was a really nnice peace i lived that last line thanks for entering and good luck


  • Lies4Truth
    July 15

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    I liked this alot It was a great short piece and I really liked the lines I hear a crack that shakes the earth and light radiates though my eyelids. There will be rain, it will fall like glass and shatter my reality Great job and good luck in my contest


  • Shadow-Kissed
    June 16

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    Amazing

    This was a great piece. Very well worded and the emotion was over-powering. This is exactly what I'm looking for in the contest. So, welcome to the finalist's list. Thanks for entering, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

    -Chantale

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

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