The painted dog

On a sunny day in Savannah, Africa Landpainter, a rainbow african painted dog, was out in about. he was a brave young dog with the heart of a hero, his strength came from the love of his companion, Kiu, A young african girl who was in love with the african, Outback. She ran alongside him with great passion, she saw the brave and loyal companion she'd always needed. He also gave her great strength, and one day Kiu and Landpainter rushed out of their small hut in a hurry, A man so....so evil, he'd killed her parents. They needed to get out quickly, so with Landpainter's love and magic he bravely ran through the dessert with kiu on his back, swiftly crawling through cracks and crevices trying his best to make sure kiu's head wouldn't be scratched along the tops.1

As they came upon a town kiu wore out, and landpainter had to sleep at a small oasis that night to keep kiu safe. Landpainter Couldn't sleep that night, and he thought a drink from the oasis would help him sleep. Well when he made it to the oasis it shone silver,making him think aloud, "Hey, I bet this is a merauge." Just staring at the quivering silver surface made him sleepy, so he took a sip and sluggishly walked over to were Kiu was sleeping. By morning landpainter was changed, in his vission and color.He had just become a painted spirit, one who walks to see people live, it was from the silver oasis, depending on your personality you get different powers, and landpainter just got the best of them all, now along with his dead parents he was a spirit who could travel between worlds, this.... this power could save any thing and anyone!So he gave, Kiu, his bonded power as well so they could be together.... the end2

Painted spirit: ( a hero of gods3

one who has unimaginable power)

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  • good

    I would love to see an expanded version of this. It would make a great childrens book. Neat story.

  • woow

    holy cow that was awsome