The End

"I don't--can't!--love you anymore. Please don't call."

A contest entry

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  • Kevan gold member
    June 21

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    Very strong and deep! Also, alluring and hooking. After reading this, I really want to know the circumstances. Good job on that and best of luck in the contest,

    Kevan.