Forest of Fears, Script I, Paragraph I1
Off the coast of Oman to the east was a tiny island, the Isle of Frei (known scientifically as D8-106). This little place was full of green foliage, towering treetops and clear water, unharmed from the daily life of hi-tech, polluted cities. The secret, and of course there always is one, was only a special few were ever allowed there. The people who were not permitted to live there had no idea it even existed. 2
The Isle of Frei was home to 38 people, both men and women. Orid, Owner of the Keep, was who kept order on the island. Orid was a dark haired, tanned fellow that looked almost Asian with a build up of strong muscles. Even though he was the Owner of the Keep, Orid still taught the occasional lesson: Personal Tactics. This was a course that consisted of teaching different Tae Kwon Do/fighting moves. He would pick a special move that fitted each person the right way, with every student that had a spectacular move was guaranteed success with future battles. 3
The second Friday after-noon of Yule was a surprise to everyone. Many things happened this day, some that can be repeated… and some that cannot be named. One thing’s for sure though, no one intended for a full-on war. 4
Armendi, Fifth of the Order of the Third Pendant, honored student for self-dependence, skilled defense, and skilled offence, walked rather fast through the outdoor eating area and into the airy corridors of the Keep. She’d just been tackled to the ground by Rausso, Second of the Order of the Third Quadrille, honored for courage, extended self-defense, obedience, midnight courses, and Second Student Bronze Medallion award. 5
Angry and disappointed, Armendi strode into the Third Pendant living quarters. She hadn’t been defeated so easily (not to mention so humiliated) for at least two months now, and that is a rare gift to posses. 6
Her long, brown wavy hair stuck to her face until she managed to get into a shower. She jumped into her clothes quickly as the alarm-bell rang out shrilly. Armendi hurriedly clambered down the stairs leading into the stone amphitheater. The whole 38 people were gathered there anxiously awaiting Orid, the Owner. All the Third-season students knew him as a brave and loyal, fair and earnest man who arrived at the Isle of Frei two and a half decades ago. If he only knew what hid in the Forest of fears Orid would have departed immediately. 7
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Author notes
the start to a very random story. I wanna finish it, but usually half way thru i get sick of it.
please comment. itll be appreciated.
Lady-*X
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"that is a rare gift to posses" 'posess'
Hmm.. i'm intrigued by this. There will hopefully be more, which i hope you will inform the group Linkin Park of because i will be waiting for it
Great write -
amazing job
This is a wonderful story. You described everything in the story. I was picturing everything while i read it. You did an amazing job on this story. You have great talent in wrinting. Keep up the great work.
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thanks Mad
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you did a really good job on this one moni, i love it!
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all i have to say is WOW...this is awsome!
much love
missy girl -
awesome
wow! that is a really great start! it really held my interest, you've really described a very interesting world thats for sure, and it makes for great reading...cant wait for the next installment
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This is a very good start. Maybe more details in how your story world is set up- it sounds like a very intriguing world. You may think about re-wording some of it, and adding more details. My curiosity is sparked.
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B-E-A-U-tiful write
This is a great start. You don't have to read n/e thing in return. b/c none of my stuff could amount 2 this but i would appreciate it if you would read my story 'Lydie- chapter 1' -
i like this. its very descriptive---i really wish i could write stories like that...this story is very interesting
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Indeed I take pleasure in hearing a good comment. I am grateful for your kindness, Fair Film-Watcher.
lol *ahem cough* better
now, the next part may not b round for a while, heee hee, oh well. I shall try.
thanks once again
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I loved the ending of the chapter moni!!!! i am on the edge of my seat till i read the new installation to the story. Loved it! When ever i read a story i picture everything that the story has told and ... i guess with out being able to read the next chapter the blockbuster hit that you have made into a film in my head has been cut! ( in a sense ) and i cant wait to see the end of the 'film'. You have a knack for writing mon.... ye must never forget! Great read .
Peace,
Z
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