Addiction

White gold, lures me.1

Sinking me low.2

Needful, deep.

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  • SAVAGEshark.
    July 11, 2009

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    This is deep.The choice of words is wise and simple.Its like you have really studied this or been through it.
    I like it,it leaves you thinking.


    • Crys Moro
      July 11, 2009
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      UH... thanks for the comment!! And just for the record, I've never been through it. It's just that drug addiction is a subject so common nowadays that I'm constantly thinking about the effect it has on its users, and the people around them....


  • Beau Noir
    June 12, 2009

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    Hmmm interesting. This could be pondered for a while... The second line was nice. Sinking is a trifling feeling and an elaborate, plain word. Good luck.