Scars Chapter 6

When the second break came, Anna and I walked to the crowded hall and pushed past everyone to get to our table. When we sat down we talked about random things like music and books. Anna liked all the same as me. Then the hall went silent and everyone looked up and smiled at the gang. I looked at Blake and he had a cigarette in his hand. He put it in his mouth and took a draw before flicking it through an open window. A girl in a cheer leading outfit skipped up to him and kissed his cheek. He grabbed her waist and pulled her against his chest roughly. She giggled and kissed his neck. I looked down at the table in front of me and tried hard to ignore the crushing feeling in my chest. Anna put her arm around me and we started to talk again.1

The hall went louder as the boys sat down and started to talk and shout. I looked slyly at Blake again and I flushed as I saw his eyes on me. I stared at his dark eyes and he kept looking at me. One of his friends grabbed his attention and he looked away quickly. I sighed and looked back at Anna2

''You like him don't you?'' She asked. I blushed and nodded. She sighed and nodded,3

''Well, if he hurts you, Come to me'' She spoke. I nodded again and ate my apple slowly. I got up to go to the bathroom and I left Anna sitting eating. The halls were cold and dark as I tried to remember where the bathroom was. I heard chuckling and I turned sharply around.. I sighed as I realized there was no one there,I turned back round and started to walked,4

''Hey Freak'' Came the last voice in the world I wanted to hear. He grabbed my wrist and shoved my into the wall roughly. I gasped and took a deep breath as Blake put his hand on my neck lightly.5

''So, How is Anna..Hm?'' He whispered in my ear. I shivered as his cool breath hit my face and made me lean forward slightly.6

''Le..t.. me..Go'' I begged, my voice broke in fear as he pressed a little harder to my throat.7

''I don't think I want to'' He hissed as his hand ran through my hair. I tried to push him but he was too tall, His hair fell into his eyes and he towered over me. I pushed the hair out of his eyes and gasped as I saw his pupils..He was high....8

''Have you took drugs?'' I asked. He chuckled and took a step back from me. He shook and slightly fell forward, I grabbed him and huffed as he passed out on me. I tutted and managed to pull him into the girls bathroom, I got him into the stall and I sat him on a toilet and locked the door. His pale skin had a faint sheen of sweat on it. His eyes had bags under them and his lips were bruised and red, I watched him and then got a plastic cup and filled it with water for when he woke.9

When he did, he jumped up and flung the toilet seat up. He leaned over it and vomited roughly. I stood up and swept his hair back and rubbed his back until he calmed down. He sighed and leaned back and looked up at me.10

''Sorry'' He whispered, I nodded and watched as he leaned back over and gagged again. When he was done I gave him the cold water and spoke.11

''You should just take sips..You don't want to upset your stomach again'' I whispered as he put it to his lips. He did as I said and put the cup down.12

''So, you get high, drunk and then pass out?'' I asked.He laughed and nodded. I shook my head and he rested his head against the cool wall.13

''I'm sorry about sorta attacking you in the hall'' He laughed clearly uncomfortable. I grabbed my bag and looked down at him. He was close to sleep so I walked back to the hall and smiled at Anna.14

''What?'' She laughed15

''Nothing'' I smiled and looked away at the gang sitting calmly. The bell rung and I followed Anna to our next class...Maybe Blake would be there...??

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  • ELFgirl12
    August 26

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    Amazing! Again, there are a few mistakes. To name only one...

    In paragraph 14, the correct wording to use would be "uncomfortabe", rather than "uncomfy". You also did that in one of the previous entries,FYI.

    You might want to look through this once more, but you don't need to for this contest. I'm not sure where this story is going, and I hope to read more sometime. I was wondering if you could combine all of the chapters into one entry for me. It would be easier for me to give it a trophy if you were to do that. If it's too much work, that's fine. I'll just put a trophy on the first chapter. Well, chapter 2...but the first chapter you entered. Good job, and keep up with the incredible writing!

    -Ellie (Rae)


  • Lullaby.x
    August 22

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    Aww you wasn't that big of a jerk in this chapter!
    Well kinda was you know when he was strangeling Anna, but after he puked he was pretty nice lol.


  • RhiannonJade
    July 24
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    woah that was really funny!! its a great story btw

  • I haven't read chapter 1 2 3 4 5 so it made it a bit confusing. HOWEVER this was good!
    ~Bring Me 2 Life

  • wow. that was great! I once had a dream about that up until the "hey freak" exept the library was flooded and was supposed to be a water park.


  • Satan-chan
    June 17
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    AHhahah1!

    I love it!! heheh can't believe him.... Uh! i think almost bad guys used drugs... I think..

  • omfg u r the best writer eva but, i hate you. Do you want me to die? left a cliff hanger *tsk tsk tsk* u better be writing more

  • Realmente ho goduto di questo. Forte sensibilità e descrizione. Lavoro molto buon! Chiara

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