Reminisce of the Past

Wind whipped across his young face1

While sand pelted his fragile skin2

His small body fighting to push forward3

Terrified, he reached out 4

Groping the air and grasping nothing5

The path behind him was destroyed6

An empty desert of hopes and dreams7

And in the sand leading to him8

Only one set of footprints were found9

He cried in desperation10

Searching for what he knew he would not find11

He was lost and alone12

The pain tearing him apart from the inside out13

All he wanted was to be loved14

And instead was given a bundle of hatred15

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  • Keirii
    June 13
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    This reminds me of the footprints poem. Have you ever read it? It's really good

    Anyways, back to your poem. lol.

    This is very beautiful in an intense way. It's full of emotion and I love that about it. Way to give me an amazing storyline, with beautiful words

    Good luck in my contest!!!