The Chipmunk Monster

A little girl and her parents were walking through a dark woods. Suddenly, the chipmunk monster jumped out at them! They ran like crazy. The chipmunk monster followed them. The little girl screamed, "Help! Help!" Then, a great big cookie came down from the sky and crushed the girl's parents! "Oh no!" screamed the little girl. She found a hole in the ground. "I hate cookies now," she said. Then the girl got killed. The end.1

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I was 5 years old when I wrote this.

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  • -Miss-Samantha-
    August 4, 2005
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    do you have any idea how hard i am laughing. i love this. lol. death, gore, violence.... chipmunks. great job 5 year old broccoli