"Hey Jessica" my mom yelled from the livingroom it scared me so bad i cut deeper then i meant to "Hey mom" i yell in response just so she dosent get worried and come in here.I turn on the water to wash away the blood i wash off my blade and put it back in the drawer that I always keep it in. My mom knocks on the door and tells me to come help her cook dinner. "I cant" I say "im going to joeys house" "have fun" she states "I really wish you would get your hair out of your eye." My mom isnt to pleased with my new look. I wear skinny jeans, band tees, and Chuck Taylors. She definatly dosent like my hair its black with red streaks and i cut it my self so its really choppy. My mom really likes my boyfriend joey (the only thing she dose like about me) she probally likes him more then i do he`s a football player.Not someone girls like me normally date but he seems to be my only reason to live anymore.When I got to joeys house I simply walk in without knocking like I always do. "Hey joe" I say "is joey home" "yea hes in his room" Joe replied. When I walk in to his room he kisses me but when he goes to hug me he hits my cuts and I flinch he pulls up my sleve to reveal the five new cuts I made half an hour ago. "Jessica we need to talk" he says (i know were this is going) "this isnt working out i think we should see other people." I run out of the house crying my arm throbbing all i want is my one true friend my blade. 1
.......... To be continued?
this is the first chapter to my first story should i keep going?
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i love it!!! and yes u should keep going!!!
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really cool!
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yes
I am emo 2 and I would love 2 hear the rest of your story.
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yes keep going its a good story post more please
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love the idea...a lil to rushed
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u should keep writeing
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Keep going
I think you should continue with the story. I like it so far. The only thing I suggest is that you take it a bit slower so it doesn't look like you rushed with it. Paragraph's always help too. Don't stop the story though. I like the idea.
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