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The cliff? Big.1

His problems were bigger.2

He jumped.

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  • MsAlee gold member
    July 12
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    Awwww, so sad. i always hate to see people just give up because of problems.


  • Kevan gold member
    June 22
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    Haha, it was a fun little death.

    Good job. Very deep, emotional, yet a funny way of phrasing suicide. I liked it a lot actually, and the contrast between the cliff and his problems was a beautiful contrast.

    Thank you very much for entering the contest, and best of luck in it. I plan to judge tomorrow.

    Kevan.


  • FkaFatima
    June 22

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    That's really... come on! You could have said... the cliff, life-size. Or something like that.
    Yeah it made me laugh as well! I mean... if its suicide, its supposed to be sad... right?


  • elenii
    June 10
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    Haha, it may be wrong but this kind of made me laugh. Good job, best of luck in the contest =)