Pain

I will never admit your hatred still hurts me.1

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  • MsAlee
    July 12, 2009
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    wow, that is wonderfully said and tis sad as well.


  • Kevan silver member
    June 22, 2009

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    Agreeing with Beau Noir, I like the combination of hate and pain. On one hand, their polar opposites, and on the other, they couldn't be more alike. I really hope you add to this story after the contest closes. Thank you for entering and best of luck.

    Kevan.


  • Beau Noir
    June 9, 2009

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    Hatred is a strong verb and emotion. It describes a lot in itself. Pain is also a strong word. It describes a feeling, whether mental or emotional. And not admitting is common. Nice combination.