scifi

Just writing.  Bob woke up to the sound of 1

birds chirping and singing outside the window.2

The window was dirty but he looked out anyway 3

and couldnt see the birds for the fog.  The fog4

was thick and he could see the sunrise though as5

the fog was lifting.  6

Bob went to the closet to put on a shirt7

and pants.  Seeing a light inside , he was 8

drawn in to the light rays that beamed him to another9

part of the house.  He was standing in the kitchen with10

some clothes on and his hair sparkling with light.  11

Dazed from the event , he staggered around until he sat in12

a chair and began to dream.  13

Dreaming of the light rays and 14

the fog with birds fluttering around his window.  15

He woke up in front of the coffee maker pouring a cup of16

java.  Staring in a daze at the steam lifting up to his face17

he saw a little alien like elf dancing in the steam and winking18

at Bob.  Oh no thought Bob those stories about elves are true only this elf has antennae.  An alien elf?, thought Bob.  19

Suddenly , the elf grew in size.  Bob looked at the elf's stomach and he could see what appeared as a galaxy of swirling gases and planes of elfish delight and horror.  20

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A story that ends but continues.

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  • Trees leave
    August 2, 2005
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    that was interesting, it caught my attention from the beggining and now I need you to write more, so um, pleaaaaase write mooore!!......okay bye
    --~a clue to the truth~--