It all gets worse when the sun goes down

It all gets worse when the sun goes down1

I don't want to be alone, and I tell you so, so you come with me2

Chain-link fence rattles as you drag your fingertips across it3

Hot muggy early August weather4

My mom's out of town for a few days5

It's 1 am and I'm not ready to go home6

We're young and we can do what we want7

Sitting at the truck stop, stale coffee and deep conversation8

All you talk about is all the stupid things you and your friends did 9

All I talk about is how great Neutral Milk Hotel is, you don't listen10

On the way home by 3, I drive while you wave your arm out the window11

Back at my house, closed up and dark inside12

In my room you kiss my face, and I tell you I want you to fuck my brains out13

After it is over you go to sleep, I creep out of bed14

On my front poorch I smoke a cigar15

I had hoped this would all be systematic, but here we are, you asleep in my bed, and the sun is coming up.16

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