It was May 23,2004, the day was warm and sunny. All the kids were outside playing hopscotch and jump-rope. Kali's mom was inside making some cookies for the church bakesale. They had just moved into the neighborhood, so they didn't know anyone really well. It was about 2:00 pm Meagen and Kali were inside the house talking, neither of them thought about locking the doors. As Kali sat at the kitchen table, she saw the kids playing outside. "Mom, can I go outside and play with the kids,please?", said Kali. Her mother replied,"Yea hun, just listen for when I call you for dinner." With that said Kali ran outside and started talking to the kids. "Hi, my name is Kali, can I play with you?" she asked a little girl. The little girl shook her head and they all started playing.1
Kali's mom,Meagen, was inside cleaning her bedroom when the strange man came in. Meagen never noticed anything different,so she kept cleaning. "CLASH!!". "Hello?, Is anyone there?? Hello??", Meagen said. She looked out her bedroom door but didn't see anyone or anything. She went back to cleaning her room, while the man looked around. Meagen turned on the radio and started singing,"My Give a Damn's busted....". The man heard some singing so he went to check it out. He peeked his head in her door, but she didn't see him. He hurried up and ran into the living room. "BANG!!" "Hello?, Is anyone there?? Hello??", Meagen said worried this time. 2
Meagen left her room this time and the guy snuck up behind her. "Hello sweetheart.", he said gruesomly. Meagen's face turned as white as a piece of paper. "If you scream for help, I will cut ur stomach and tear ur insides out slowly, got it?" He said with a big smile on his ugly little face. All Meagen could do was shake her head in shook and fear. The man threw her onto the couch, "Where is your tape,rope,anything?" he said. Nervous she pointed to the bathroom. -If I get him into the bathroom, I can lock it.- She thought. The man went to the bathroom and she ran to close the door. As soon as she did he saw her and stabbed her in the leg. "OOOOHHHHH", Meagen screamed in pain.3
He kicked her leg, where it was stabbed, knowing it would hurt worse. "Get your ugly a$$ on the couch NOW!!!", he screamed at her. She finally got enough nerve to get up, after about 20 minutes. "Please sir could you get me a towel for my leg?", she begged him. He threw a towel at her and she wrapped it around her leg. "Now where is the tape,rope, and all that stuff?", he repeated himself. -I can't fight him with my leg like this, think fast Meagen think fast.- "Over there,over in the kitchen, in the drawer.", she said raspily. -I'm losing to much blood, Oh geeze help someone help.- 4
"Say, didn't you have a child?" He asked her in a smirky way. "DON'T YOU DARE TOUCH HER YOU ASSHOLE!!!", She screamed at him. He ran over to her and cut her left arm all the way down from her elbow to her hand. "NOOO PLEASE STOP STOP PLEASE", she begged him. He didn't listen he started slowly pulling the muscle away from the nerves, and the nerves away from the bone. She started crying it hurt so bad. "Mommy,Mommy!! Guess what? Mommy!", Kali said cheerfully coming up the stairs on the front porch.5
"Kali, NO, NO KALI, NOOOOO", Meagen screamed. He cut her other arm and did the samething to it. Kali came in the door and he grabbed her and threw her on the couch beside her mother. "If you scream for help I will cut your tummy open and tear your insides out slowly,got it?", He said with a big smile on his ugly little face.6
Kali started to cry knowing that she couldn't do anything. She moved over to her mom and put her head in Meagen's bloody lap. "So Kali, is that your name?, me and you are going to go play a little game." He said. "Mommy, I don't want to play any games, help.", Kali said crying. All Meagen could do was let her daughter go, they both cried as he led Kali into the bedroom. "Do NOT make a sound, the only sound you can make is when I tell you what to do, got it?" He said. "Ye,ye,yes sir I get it."she said softly. The next thing she knew he was on top of her, all she could do was cry. --Please stop I didn't do anything, Why me? Why now? MOM HELP-- He was finally done, and let her go. "Mom, it was awful, I hate that game." Kali said bawling her eyes out. Meagen took her daughter and rocked her gently.7
The man got mad and ripped Kali away from her mother. This will teach you to baby your daughter. "SPLAT,STAB,STAB,GUSH,HELP,NOOOOO,UGH". That was all you could hear besides Kali's crying. "MOM!!!!!!!!!", Kali screamed. All that was left of Meagen was, an ear,her 2 arms cut in half,her legs, stabbed hundreds of times,and her stomach diced and sliced with her insides ripped out. "See your next Kali, ohhh, your next." He said smiling at her. "Please sir, NO NO NO NO, SPLAT,STAB,STAB,GUSH,HELPPPPP,NOOOO." That's all Kali could do to try to get away. He stabbed her in the arms hundreds of times,cut her throat till her head fell off, her legs cut in half with the bones sticking out, and her stomach cut four times,with her insides hanging out. He took Kali and Meagen's insides and spelt, "DEATH", on the floor. 8
Blood was everywhere and all he could was laugh. He left the house without cleaning up or cleaning himself up. A few weeks went by and no one had seen Kali at school or Meagen at work. The neighbor finally went over to their house and knocked on the door. No one answered. "Meagen, Kali?? It's Brinley. Please open the door, Meagen? Kali?." Brinley went in the house only to find the bodies of his friends, and blood everywhere. "Noo please tell me this didn't happen, please God this can't be true." Brinley said crying as he fell to the floor. He ran out of the house and called the police. "911 dispatch, please state the nature of your emergency.", the operator said. "Th- The- They are DEAD!! My neighbors they were murdered, they are dead, oh geeze they are dead." Brinley said crying to the dispatcher. 9
"Please sir, calm down, I am sending the ambulance and police right away. Stay on the line with me until they get there." the dispatcher said. "Ok, I can't believe they are gone! Who could do this to them? They were so sweet and omgsh I can't believe it." Brinley cried. "Yes sir I understand that, I hear sirens so I will let the police take it from here." the dispatcher said. Brinley couldn't handle everything that went on. He went inside and locked the door. The police cleaned up the bodies and the mess, after the detectives took pictures, and got prints. "Geeze, this was a brutal murder, how could someone do that to them?",said one of the officers. 10
Meagen and Kali were layed to rest on April 2, 2004. No one exactly knows why anyone would want to kill them or even hurt them, yet someone did. Even to this day they haven't caught the man that did this to him, weird isn't it?11
Author notes
this is my 1st contest story i hope you like it.....dude my mind is like really morbib lol
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Comments
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Hmm, not really written from any POV, but nevermind. Good luck- but you haven't got Penguins Eat Cats in your author comments, so if it isn't updated in 24 hours I'll remove it.
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i luv it hunny its awesum especially if u read it alone on hallyween by urself luv it
ur hubby,
tony
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lol dad thats hilarious.....but i scared myself when i wrote this lol i was told to like write another one to it should i???
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that is good you had me scaerd sh@#less
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lol thankz.....well u said murder lol
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Well, that definately was brutal. lol I'm glad I wasn't eating...good job on this though.
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holy crap bloody n gory thats awsome tho!! kick a$s!! so this is tru then well it was great
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lol This is KrAzY, I like it but still, weird...lol Very original and unique, I could help but laugh at the part that said "cut her throat till her head fell off" lol I couldn't help it, I guess I could just see a person that it happened to, and I guess I just like gruesome stuff, lol, great write, keep up the good work!
~Ashley -
lol sis im sry ur eatin n read it lol omgsh itz ok i promise idk im a morbid child i guess idk...it juss came to me...shoot im sleepin in the livin room screw my room lol im in hir alone uh wrong....lol but ya i got myself scared lol im such a cheesball but im glad you liked it.......do u think i might win the contest??? who knows i dont
LoTz oF lOvE
Ur LiL SIS
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OMG!!! Im eating ice cream sis... and i dont think i can eat anymore after that! But this is an awsome story!!! How did you think that up??? OMG... Im so locking the door!!!! Excellent write! Its scary, grusome and sad! I wanted to cry when I read the part when the daughter came in!
EXCELLENT WORK!
Lots of Luv (and scared shivveres)
Ur BiG SiS
~Melpomene~
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