Essay on Story Writing Techniques- Homework

My initial impression of strict structured story writing (as opposed to 'on the spot' or spontaneous writing) was one of skepticism. Most of my 'notes' have been done mentally and I have never kept written outlines of subjects or characters beforehand and in doing so, I was convinced that the natural mood of the story would suffer greatly. 1

This proved to be untrue. As I followed the patterns set before me in each lesson I was able to see a skeleton of my plot emerge, my characters’ main qualities take form and the general direction of the entire piece was set to some limited degree. Though at the time I could not see the use in this.After all, I thought, wouldn't these things happen in a natrual progression as I wrote my story? But as I began to write I found myself relying heavily on the notes, and synopsis. 2

While it's true that the outline and notes proved to be of good use I did find that once the story took on its own life I was 'forced' to break away from many aspects of the plot summaries that I had written for my synopsis and that some characters did not evolve as I had planned. For instance, originally, I had planned for one of the main characters to be killed in the end but as the story played out this section took an entirely different direction. I can see that this may have presented a huge problem had I sent my synopsis in to a publisher for consideration and then, in the end, made this important change in a main twist of the story's conclusion. 3

So, while I see that this structured way of story writing can be useful, I also see that no matter how much I outline beforehand once the story begins its own 'movement' (or life) many of these outlines and preconceived ideas may fall by the wayside and even major plot lines and character developments may change drastically. 4

When I relied on the structured notes they proved invaluable. Characters' physical descriptions and scenery details where much easier to expand upon when the outline was within reach. But in the cases of personality, actions of the characters and method of movement I was compelled, in many areas, by the story's mood and flow to break away from my notes in many key aspects.5

After working with these pre-written conceptions of my story's main points I concluded that, while I may not wholly rely on the structure writing technique I see this direction as a valuable method.  I doubt I shall ever return to writing spontaneously in a complete sense, but instead will use notes and outlines, yet will not hold myself to them in any strict or confining manner. In other words, what I first outline may not be included in my story’s final presentation even in the major plot directions. I can only assume then that I had must not send a synopsis to a publisher to speak for my story as I cannot be certain of the main developments.6

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  • Living Passion
    August 19, 2005
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    I agree with so much of this. I have always tried writing without notes and the like when I tackle stories, sometimes notes and such feel like they would only bog me down. However, the stories I've written for classes including outlines and the like often end up better organized, and also more consistent. I also agree with the fact that the original synopsis won't usually be the same as the original story, but it is a good place to start from. God bless
    ~Stefani~


  • hugh wyles silver member
    August 2, 2005
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    Dear Mary,
    There is a cornucopia of good advice and sound experience in this 'story', much of which I apply when writing my ballads. From research of the subject I make random notes of salient points, dates, names, events etc. I then plot out the sequence of the noted details as the framework for the story. As most of the subjects I choose are historical, the development of the story is largely predetermined as is the nature of its ending. Composition of the poem can only then proceed although some poetic elements may present themselves from the story itself. In fact I often have the concluding lines, in embryonic form, already in mind and work towards those.
    I apologize for your excellent notes having lead me into a dissertation of my own working procedure. Suffice it to say that what you have written coincides with my own modus operandi and I am bookmarking it for re-reading.
    Thankyou for sharing this. Applause.
    Love and hugs, XXX Hugh.