Pink ribbon pins attached 1
To her shirt 2
Her eyes forever burn 3
With brightness 4
Anf light 5
Hard to tell 6
That she fights a battle 7
Deep inside 8
of her kind heart 9
Yet i grow worried 10
For she wont eat 11
Laying there 12
Under this white sheet 13
For she missed her Kemo treatment this week 14
She's giving up 15
This hard battle 16
This I can see 17
Almost clearly 18
As the sorrow on her face 19
Tears cover20
My sad filled eyes 21
For she isnt breathing 22
Not without this reched machine 23
I dont want to see her 24
In so much pain 25
Spred across her face 26
Yet im dragged here27
To this reched place 28
To witness her final days29
Passing bye30
Fading away quickly 31
Her heart falters 32
This one time 33
So I pray to the one 34
Who is so divine35
"Take my granny 36
From this place 37
To heaven above 38
So glory can shine 39
On her face40
High in the sky41
Staying in heaven" I pray 42
My face wet with tears 43
For God has heard 44
My prayers today 45
For my granny has died 46
And has gone away 47
To heaven smiling 48
Greating my Papa 49
Who has long passed away 50
Though I cry 51
Because she isnt with me 52
Tonight as i lay 53
Inside of her bed 54
Trying to calm55
My never ending tears 56
And dream of my Granny 57
Flying to heaven 58
Without any fears 59
I wake with a moan60
Of sadness and grief61
And get ready 62
For the feist of sorrow63
Ahead of me today64
While I wait 65
For the funieral to begin 66
I hold my baby cousin 67
Who doesnt understand 68
"Why is Granny in a cascet?" 69
She asked me, very deleriouse 70
"Because Granny is in heaven" 71
I say in return 72
Unable to tell her73
What else that she must learn74
"You think she's having fun up there? 75
Dancing with Jesus 76
And watching over us" 77
She asked again 78
And I couldnt help but smile 79
"Yes she is little Ema" 80
You dont know what you have 81
Till you loose it 82
This is what I have learned 83
I still miss my granny 84
And yes 85
This is a true story 86
THE END
Comments
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YAY! ANOTHR HAPPY POEM! I love these so much sissy. You are a great poet with happy and sad poems, but the happy ones are great. You are really a kind person and this should be what you write, but you can write what ever you want that makes you feel better. I love your poems so much sisy
Love ya!
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Hard to read
It's kind of heard to read because it is so long and you tempo goes from two words, to three words, to way to many words.
Great job so far keep writing
Summer
beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 3, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 3.
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This was wonderful!
I loved the detail and how you explained everything precisely.
Very nice job. I always love reading your work. =]

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beautiful i loved it. ... im soo sorry. wish i could do something to help....
.someone i know just died.3 days ago.
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AWWWWWWWWWWW! ITS SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Nice job! It was really sad. Your are a great poet! You did an excellent job, and I hope your Granny rests well in heaven.
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