Wishes Granted

Pink ribbon pins attached 1

To her shirt 2

Her eyes forever burn 3

With brightness 4

Anf light 5

Hard to tell 6

That she fights a battle 7

Deep inside 8

of her kind heart 9

Yet i grow worried 10

For she wont eat 11

Laying there 12

Under this white sheet 13

For she missed her Kemo treatment this week 14

She's giving up 15

This hard battle 16

This I can see 17

Almost clearly 18

As the sorrow on her face 19

Tears cover20

My sad filled eyes 21

For she isnt breathing 22

Not without this reched machine 23

I dont want to see her 24

In so much pain 25

Spred across her face 26

Yet im dragged here27

To this reched place 28

To witness her final days29

Passing bye30

Fading away quickly 31

Her heart falters 32

This one time 33

So I pray to the one 34

Who is so divine35

"Take my granny 36

From this place 37

To heaven above 38

So glory can shine 39

On her face40

High in the sky41

Staying in heaven" I pray 42

My face wet with tears 43

For God has heard 44

My prayers today 45

For my granny has died 46

And has gone away 47

To heaven smiling 48

Greating my Papa 49

Who has long passed away 50

Though I cry 51

Because she isnt with me 52

Tonight as i lay 53

Inside of her bed 54

Trying to calm55

My never ending tears 56

And dream of my Granny 57

Flying to heaven 58

Without any fears 59

I wake with a moan60

Of sadness and grief61

And get ready 62

For the feist of sorrow63

Ahead of me today64

While I wait 65

For the funieral to begin 66

I hold my baby cousin 67

Who doesnt understand 68

"Why is Granny in a cascet?" 69

She asked me, very deleriouse 70

"Because Granny is in heaven" 71

I say in return 72

Unable to tell her73

What else that she must learn74

"You think she's having fun up there? 75

Dancing with Jesus 76

And watching over us" 77

She asked again 78

And I couldnt help but smile 79

"Yes she is little Ema" 80

You dont know what you have 81

Till you loose it 82

This is what I have learned 83

I still miss my granny 84

And yes 85

This is a true story 86

THE END

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  • Scarlet Akira
    September 12

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    YAY! ANOTHR HAPPY POEM! I love these so much sissy. You are a great poet with happy and sad poems, but the happy ones are great. You are really a kind person and this should be what you write, but you can write what ever you want that makes you feel better. I love your poems so much sisy

    Love ya!

    -Scarlet Night

  • Hard to read

    It's kind of heard to read because it is so long and you tempo goes from two words, to three words, to way to many words.

    Great job so far keep writing
    Summer

    beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 3, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 3.

  • This was wonderful!
    I loved the detail and how you explained everything precisely.
    Very nice job. I always love reading your work. =]

  • beautiful i loved it. ... im soo sorry. wish i could do something to help....
    .someone i know just died.3 days ago.

  • AWWWWWWWWWWW! ITS SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Nice job! It was really sad. Your are a great poet! You did an excellent job, and I hope your Granny rests well in heaven.

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