the mad knight and the ghost

There once was a knight named Tim1

they said that his head was dim2

he had a milk cow for a steed3

and held books up side down to read4

and I bet he couldn't swim.5

One day he went for a ride6

all around the country side7

They say he met a ghost8

while he rested by the coast9

and he took it as his bride.10

Now they live together in Spain11

but to look for them would be in vain12

for they haunt the government of Spain only13

and they try to make them lonely14

what else do you expect for a ghost and a knight who is insane?15

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  • Wickedruby1 gold member
    November 6
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    Very good

    children should get a good laugh out of this one,it is cute and funny. If they understand it.


  • Queenie-Chan
    October 27
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    this was cool


  • musical tai
    August 12

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    Lolz, I lie da knight, he has reallly bad taste in women tho....
    + = no more sourpatch?


  • shtwyturtle
    August 9
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    Hahahaha. You have made Queen Betkins II laugh. Very good! Thank you for entering the contest.


  • franklynx
    June 15
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    really good......................


  • Wickedruby1 gold member
    June 8
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    Very good

    Very funny story, the Knight is surely insane the writer very talanted.

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