The lights blurred around me as I stumbled to the bar to order enough drink. How I'd lost my friends I didn't know, but loneliness had started to creep in as I looked round desperately for someone I recognised. Finally amongst the crowd I saw a slim figure, with bright red hair and a cheeky smirk plastered all over his face. He strutted over to me, flung his arms around my waist and picked me up as if I was a doll. I smiled and giggled happily-as a small baby would and he dropped me gently to the ground. I looked at his sparkling bright blue eyes as they gazed deeply into mine and ever so slowly he pulled me close to him and put one hand in mine and the other on my hip as we started to dance close. My head was telling me not to do it and that it would only lead to pain, but my heart told me to let go. So as he slowly lifted me chin and kissed me softly I replied with a note of guilt on my lips. His warmth made me feel safe and loved, like a princess...but I knew that this love was forbidden, I knew that I had to stop right now! I pulled away sharply and he looked at me with hurt deep in his eyes. "I can't do this I shouted at him. I can't hurt Jade!" But as I turned and walked away leaving him looking dejected with hands by his sides and head hanging in sorrow I knew the harm had already been done. There amidst the crowd I saw Jade's eyes wide and her eyes welling up with tears... Luke was hers-her ex-her one true love... I ran out on the barn, with guilt plastered all over my face-if only he would leave me alone, if only she would leave me alone! I couldn't cope with their past love-though he felt no love for her... My ears were ringing and as I breathed the cold, nights air deeply in to my lungs. A tall figure came slowly towards me with chocolate, deep brown eyes and soft, slightly curly brown hair. He took my hand in to his massive paw and led me away from there. "Y not?" I thought. Love only caused me trouble. So I went with my lust for a guy who would treat me like a slag-who I wouldn't contact the other day and he wouldn't contact me...for this way nobody would get hurt if I didn't get to know him properly, all I would feel is the pleasure those short hours would give me before slowly his soft skin would fade from my memory and yet again love would take over me...1
Author notes
This is a poem about how many teenagers go for lust these days instead of love because everything is so damm complicated-and though some people think that teenagers don't care if they hurt other people's feelings-they really do!
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Mmm the story is true and some of this is in part of one of my poems cause it affected me a lot and I just randomly felt of writing more on it. Tar for the comment x
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ooooo, so scandalous....it reminds me of your poem i just read...is it true? hmmmmm, makes me think, it could be.....i think i'm being mean, so i'll shut up with that....this piece was very piece, it had an element of surprise like your previous poem did, and i thought the whole lust and love usage was a good idea....keep writing....
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he he 2weeks away+i've got lots of luvley comments :0) thanx 2 ya all!
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hmmm intersting, i dont really go with guys for sex, a quick kiss or a few maybe, but im not like that no matter what people say. anyway, nice point babe, and i hope you're alright with everything! nice write though, l8az love ya sky xxx
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first i want to say awsome write! haha yea its rediculous how teens now a days choose one nite stands over love. ive seen many of my friends do it and i have to admit i have done it a few times and i regret it. this is truly a great write keep it up plz!!!
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i really enjoyed this, thanx for the comment on my story, it was the first one i ever really did, it wasnt really a story though....its is too true, as is yours. this was really good, it made me think of something i did in the past, it was realllllllllllyy bad, but this was so true to life i couldnt help reading ti twice.um....im not really sure what else to say but that it wasw a great write, keep it up! ~taylor
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yeh-i'm sure the guy will get over it though :0P no only joking...love can b hard to get over,but eventually time heals all. Tar hunnie x
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awww this is a great rite hun!!! majorly tuching, and fairly sad that she didnt go wit the guy hu loved her..sniff..sniff! xxx
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lol tar hunnie x not wrote for round a year or 2-just gettin back in to it really... Also stuff is only just coming up that I feel like writing about again :0) luv ya hun x didn't notice u were online contacts u on msn
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woa. That's really good. Why didn't you tell me you could write Louise?! Hmph!!! xxx
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lol i've been so dumb recently-I got so in 2 writing it I totally 4got bout paragraphs-plz people don't judge my paragraph skills on this-normally i can write in paragraphs! lol!
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wow this is really really good! only thing i can say is insert paragraphs!! lol. but other than that its good!
One love,
Kitty xxxxxxxx
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