Miranda1
As soon as I walked into the room, all the sound stopped. People turned their heads, staring unabashedly. Normally, they were not this forward; they would attempt to be discreet, despite the fact that they usually failed. But for what they though I'd done, they saw no need to fawn disinterest.2
Lana3
She walked into the room, trying to blend in and act like she'd never left. Her jaw was set and her face hardened against everyone talking about her. The initial silence her entrance created had ended as soon as the door slammed shut. She could say we were bitches to talk about her, that we didn't know the full story; in a way, we were. But we had every right to talk about her.4
Alicia5
As the door closed, they all tried to pretend they hadn't been staring. I stood in the kitchen as she entered the house, and could tell from the sudden, immediate, dead silence that she had returned. You could smell their fear, placed in a situation they hadn't talked about in the etiquette classes their parents forced them to attend.6
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WIcked
the room or into the room prehaps? idk just thought id take a shot at naming it. so there....yep...im in study hall and i dont want to work and told Bode that i was just in the library to return a book, but he prolly hasnt noticed, but....yah, ill see ya around.
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thank you so much. i've read books from different points of view, and always liked it, so i decided to try it myself
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thanks. i don't know about more, but maybe
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Cool
this is really interesting. i like the way you did it, different points of views. this entry could be like a back cover to a whole novle! a different chapter on each different characters views of the situation! Great job! -
hmmmm...interesting, i like it. more?
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3rd line, 1st paragraph- "they though I'd done" thought?
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