The Court of Immortal Royalty

I’m lying on my bed in the cold, yet comforting stone room. It’s dark, and I can feel the breeze whisking in through the bars on the only window in the tiny room. Moonlight blankets my skin. My bed sits in the center of the circular room where the light touches down from the starless sky. It’s black, the sky, every night blackness and moonlight. I can’t help but giggle into my pillow when I consider that thought. The sky I mean, it’s like my life. No sun, no warmth but all of the comfort I could ever ask for. Giggling still as I thought, I sat up stretching, looking around the room. 1

It was night, of course, and night time is the time of my masters, the time I come alive with them, for them. As I lower my hands from my stretch I run my fingertips over the skin on my neck, bumpy, scared, and sore. I giggle again, loudly and excitedly. I can’t wait for this night to begin.2

My name is Sunset, and I am a Countess in The Court of The Immortal Royalty, I am one of very few lucky girls allowed to call ourselves Countess. Why am I allowed you must want to ask? I was picked, chosen at birth by Royal Blood Beings, we are raised in this land of mystical creatures and unbelievable, pleasurable tasks. I was born Nadia Wellington, on a small plantation in South New Hampshire in the year 1803, it is now 1888. The one who claimed me, Darius Drake bought me from my parents before I was even born. I am now 85 years old, but am as beautiful as I have ever been and will stay this way. 3

Let me explain myself to you a little. I have long red hair, like silk it flows around me as I walk. My skin is pale, as is everyone else’s of our breed, and my eyes are red like fire. I have yet to grow my fangs, as I have not been fully drained and do not have right to call myself Vampire, yet. I will age no more, Darius drained me just enough to stop that when I was a mere 16 years old. I like that I am young looking, many x-human woman here are much older that I, with wrinkles and lines on their skin that I shall never have to worry about. There is one other who is as young in appearance as me, her name is Nightfall and her Master is Damarco Drake, brother of Darius. She and I arrived the same day, from the same settlement, two small children being sold off to the highest bidding monster. I thank my parents for being picky, and raising me well, if it weren’t for that I would have surely been a treat for an untrained werewolf, or even worse, the center of an unbiased experiment by an unstable mad scientist. Nightfall and I are fortunate. 4

Our job is to feed our Masters, pleasure our Masters, and trap for our Masters, if I could die, I would die for my Master. His cold teeth on my skin cause electric pain and pleasure to run through me every time he feeds from me. I shudder with pleasure as I sit here on my bed, just thinking about it. If only I had my own fangs to sink into his shoulder the way his do into mine. I shudder again from head to toe closing my eyes as my feet dangle in the darkness off of my bed.5

Then, the most anticipated sound my ears could ask for, the knock at the door.6

Knock Knock 7

“Come in”8

And in no time my love, my reason is there next to me on my bed, his hand in mine.9

“My Love, My Sunset”10

His voice is so smooth in my ear and I turn to kiss him. His teeth graze along my lips and our mouths meet. I reach up to his glorious main of long dark locks and entwine my fingers into it aggressively. He draws me in tight as he kisses me deep. I can feel his teeth on my tongue and I can taste blood in my mouth. Awe the taste of blood, my most favorite thing and his mouth combined release the most unreal, wonderful feeling of lust I could ever ask for. His fingers reach the back of my head, grabbing my hair tightly in his fingers he pulls me from his lips, and I let out a mournful whimper as I look up at his intense red eyes. I can taste blood, it swims in my mouth and I feel it running down my chin.11

“Oh my dear” He said with a smile, 12

“You look so beautiful with blood in your mouth, running out of your mouth.” 13

He pulls me in slow, pressing me into him, licking the corners of my mouth seductively. I live for this feeling, I live for him. His hand reaches up my night gown, and he rests his cold palm on my thigh, my body learns toward him automatically and I grip his hair tightly still. His mouth finds mine again and his hand moves farther up my thigh, digging into my flesh with his long fingernails, he reaches my undergarments and rips them from my body forcefully. I giggle into his breath and pull him away from my mouth.14

He’s looking down on me smiling, I know what he wants. He wants me, he wants to be inside of me. I smile up at him, seductively and pull myself up onto his lap. I can feel his bulge through his resting garments as it bumps into my naked flesh. He tugs playfully on my hair, forcing me down into his lap harder.
“You know exactly what I want don’t you? That’s why I love you Sunset, that’s why you are mine forever.”15

He lifted me up and I felt him enter me. Slow and careful he filled me up and I shook with pleasure on top of him as he reached his depth limit. My body exploded with satisfaction and I whimpered loudly again. He pulled down tighter on my hair, thrusting himself into me harder and faster with smooth rhythm. My head was back as far as it could go, if I were still full human my neck may have snapped under the pressure. I heard him start to growl and knew he was getting closer, closer to biting me. I trembled anxiously at the thought and pleasure scorched through me as he still thrust into me, quickening his pace.16

I felt his mouth on my neck then, and knew it would be soon. He forced himself to gently kiss my skin, but the muffled growl in the back of his throat suggested a much more aggressive purpose. I felt his head tilt back in a sharp movement and I shut my eyes.17

“Please Master”18

I whimpered as he still rocked back and forth, in and out of me. Then finally, he jerked his head forward again, piercing my flesh brutally with his teeth. They sank into me sharply and deeply all the while thrusting his hard, male flesh deeper into my willing innocence for evil pleasure. Blood ran down my breasts and into my belly button, he still pulled tightly on my hair, still the growling echoed through his chest as he drank from me. My eyes closed, rocking back and forth on his lap and his teeth stuck into my skin like needles. His growl intensifies and I know that means he must let me go soon. I beg him breathlessly,19

“Master please, please don’t stop.”20

Against my pleading he releases me, and a pulsating pleasure runs up my spine as my body explodes into a trance of shaking and desire. My eyes roll back into my head and he pulls harder still on my hair as he reaches climax. Our bodies melt into a heap on top of each other and he kisses my forehead. 21

“Exceptional way to begin the evening, wouldn’t you agree love?” 22

His fingers caress my back lightly as he speaks.23

“We must get out of your bed though, or we are likely to be here all night.”24

“I wouldn’t mind that at all My Beloved.” I replied looking up into his calm red eyes.25

“Yes Dear if you had it your way we would spend every night blessed moment in this bed, but we simply can not.”26

He looked down on me as I pouted at him.27

“We are expected at Nightfall’s for her and my Brothers Reckoning Ceremony, it is very important to her that you are there.”28

“Yes Darius, when will be our Reckoning Ceremony?”29

A Reckoning Ceremony is when a Non-Blood Born receives Blood Born rights through the one who claimed them, making them as close to the chosen specie as they can be without being Blood Born. Tonight Nightfall will become a Righted Vampire. She will be drained of her mortal blood in front of our clan by her Master, and she will change into a Full Immortal. 30

Oh how envious I am of my dear friend. When will Darius claim me to be fully his? When will I gain my Immortal Rights and be free to join my love through eternity? I wait patiently, as I know he can’t keep me waiting long. He wouldn’t do that to me.31

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Just a thought... Vampires are hot..

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  • oh baby...

    Well....um... that was AWESOME!!!!!!
    I loved it!!!
    More??? Please???


    • rettalee
      June 8
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      MORE CHAPTERS!!

      Will post two more chapters tomorrow!! Glad every one has enjoyed my dirty thoughts so far, and I hope to keep you interested! Thanks!

  • oh my gosh.....yes more please! I loved it! xD


  • jasje
    June 4
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    wow more?

    beginning: 4, language: 3, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 5.