When the bell rung for second break I got up out my seat and grabbed my black bag. I got pushed several times as I headed for the crowded hall once more. I kept my head down and got a plate of cheese pasta, I ate slowly and looked up as I heard the familiar cheering and laughing. The gang stood in the same position as I had first saw them.1
All their hoods were up covering their beautiful faces. Everyone stared at them with wonder.. I sighed and put my head down and chewed slowly. When I finished I put my paper plate in the bin and walked quickly out into the busy corridors. I saw the huge gang walk out before me and I looked away quickly.2
I started to walk around, not really going anywhere.I sighed and pulled my hood up as a couple of girls walked by me and giggled. My head was down, so I didn't really see anybody walking towards me, I gasped as I bumped into something really hard. I wobbled backward for a second, my balance knocked off until a hand grabbed my wrist and steadied me. I looked up and gasped again in pure and utter horror. There stood the gang of boys with their faces a mixture of shock, amusement and anger.The boy in front.. the beautiful one that had pulled my hood down yesterday stared again and spoke 3
''You should watch where you are walking'' His voice was low and frightening.. I had to admit I was scared as he glared down at me. His tall body towering over me. It didn't help the matter that there were about 5 other boys behind him. I flushed but stood up straight and glared back at him. The other boys chuckled but I couldn't care less.4
''It was an accident'' I hissed back. I flicked my hood down and his eyes widened briefly before continuing to glare at me.5
''You should also watch that little mouth of yours, You don't know who you are speaking to'' The boy spoke in a steely voice,6
''Whatever'' I replied smoothly. His glare continued and he hissed.I continued not to back down to this rude boy in front of me.He turned round and waved his hand, dissmissing the gang. They all walked away ,7
''Who do you think you are?'' I asked,8
''I should ask you the same question'' The boy hissed.9
''I'm Lily'' I spoke calmly trying to contain my temper,10
''Right Lily, I'm Blake''He spoke in his smooth voice.11
''Right well BLAKE...I have to go'' I spoke harshly, I pulled my hood up and was about to walk past him when he grabbed my wrist and pulled me to him. I hit his chest with a thud, I looked up suprised and he smiled down at me, his white teeth shining in the light.12
''Why do you wear that hood, You are far too beautiful'' He cooed.I shivered and blushed deeply as I tried to regain my previous hate for Blake,13
''Yeah right..My face is horrible..I mean look at my scars'' I whispered looking down in disgust at myself.14
''They are just scars, they will fade in time'' He whispered as he edged closer to me. His minty breath hit my face again making me look into his dark eyes. His brown hair was soft looking and not covered in gel. He put his arms on either side of the wall as he pushed me into it. My heart beat erratically and my palms sweated. His lips moved closer to mine and he put his hands in my hair, I shivered as he smiled down at me. His pink lips were a centimetre away from mine, I looked at him pleading him to kiss me but he roughly pulled away and chuckled.15
''Like I could ever kiss you, Lily'' He taunted. My face fell and I gasped as he laughed.16
''Oh well'' He cooed as he walked away. I sobbed and my fingers started trembling.17
''Oh and pull your hood back up, I don't want to throw up my lunch.'' He laughed loudly as he walked away, He vanished around the corner and I fell on the cold tiled floor. I pulled my hood up and clutched my bag to my chest. I sobbed until the bell rang and I walked slowly to my last two classes of the day.......18
TBC
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Comments
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Well written. Just as good as the first chapter. Hope to see more entries

-Ellie (Rae)


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Omgshh he's such a jerk! Though i'm kind of glad they didn't kiss. It would've been a little too...random, but i still liked how you wrote this out. I loved this chapter too!
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Holy christ, what a douche! I mean, God.
Well, good job with this. And indeed that was a spelling error in paragraph 15. It's spelled 'erratically'.
Thanks for entering, and good luck in the contest!
Style: 9/10
Flow: 10/10
Uniqueness: 5/5
Readability: 6/7
Effect: 8/10
Lack of Errors: 3/3
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I think the boy llike her. lolx.x..x. i loveeeeeeeee it.... i wanted to know what happen next.. but i really want to cry when i read this story. i dk y. sadd... -
I lvoe it Amanda! Im glad tehy didnt kiss, It so diff from everytihng else, wehre they kiss and live happy ever after, lol, your storyies are the bom shizz! HAH!!!!!!!


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Awh hes so mean
I almost cried lolz pathetic I know
I hope you write more and things get better for her. I am gready I know
Keep writting.
~ Chelsey

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I Love ure storyyies
Love this 3chapter Great Job!
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Realy good, alot better than anything I've written.

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