The Life That Never Was(Part 1)

I walked down the street staring at the sunset. It was sad to see the sun say goodbye. It began to slowly lower, and the sky started to turn into darkness. I turned away from the sun set. The wind blew my wavy dark brown hair. The wind felt good and warm against my dark brown skin. My eyes were purple with a blank expression.1

 Where had the life I knew gone? When it was filled with joy. Nothing to fear. No worrying. It had once been there but is now gone. It's like i had fell into....darkness.2

"Bravo! Bravo! Those were the magic words I wanted to hear! So sad, so passionate! Whats next?" A man with red spikey hair and green eyes appeared in front of me. He was wearing a long black hood.3

"That was perfect! I loved it! Tell me more!" he began smiling. "What do u want?" I stared at him with cold eyes. Although I've seen this man almost a hundred times he still gives me the creeps. "Nothing but-" he vanished and reappeared behind me and whispered in my ear "Your heart."4

I took a swing at him and he disappeared again. I cold feel cold metal in my hands. I looked down to see Grave Digger in my hands. It was the name of my weapon I had found when i had to fight these weird looking monsters. It was a silver sword with black and red chains around it. It also had another handle made completely out of bones which had sharp spikes sticking through it. I just kinda woke up with it in my hand one day when these white things attacked me. Anyways I tried taking another swing at him, but he just kept warping through a dark void.5

"AXEL!!!" A loud female voice yelled out of nowhere. "Uh oh! I gotta run. Boss is calling me." He vanished. I fell down as I tried to hit him one last time. I grunted and punched the sand. My weapon flashed and disappeared.6

I got up and started walking again. This is the 10th time this has happened. Next time I will get him. Suddenly the dark void came back. Stupidly i just sat there and watched. A short skinny lady with blonde hair laid back and blue eyes came through it.7

"Lets go you brat! I'm tired of this BS coming from you!" Her voice sounded just like the one from earlier. I turned around and took off running. I heard lightening hit. I looked back to see a ray of lightening following me. Then "Oof!" I ran into something and fell down. Grave Digger appeared in my hands again and I hurredly took a swing.8

BOOM! Lightening struck me. "AHHHHH!" I screamed. My heart had stopped completely for five seconds, then it started up again. I gasped for air. My body was paralyzed. The lady with blonde hair grabbed my foot and dragged me through the dark void. After I entered I black out completely.9

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~TO BE CONTINUED~11

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  • Sakura-Fang
    June 29
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    yes it is ineresting in my opinion

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.